8 [Report This]Date: May 26, 2007 07:23 pm Title: Land Down Under
Very nice. This line was great - "The freezing waves were beginning to wake him up from his week-long stupor and the insomniac nights that came with it."
Date: May 21, 2007 09:25 am Title: Land Down Under
This is really wonderful. Even more than the happy ending, actually, I like all the detail about Jim alone in Australia, not sleeping, and thinking about things. Just... great.
Date: May 21, 2007 07:48 am Title: Land Down Under
This was really well done. Well written, and your descriptions were excellent, especially the image of a scruffy Jim in a sweatshirt and cargo shorts, wading barefoot into the water (I have a thing for tall man calves, just like so many JK fans like his forearms, so his outfit hit me right THERE. Guh.)
I especially liked that Jim referred to June 10th as his independence day. That, "he wasn’t enough of a jackass, enough of an idiot to go after someone else’s wife."
But the part that was just perfect was when he said "I do" to her.*sigh*
Very nicely done! I'm off to see if you've written more here.