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Reviewer: WingWoman Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2007 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 1

It's a small thing, but I really have to say that I loved how you wrote "Fancy, New Beesly" instead of "Fancy New Beesly."  It made my day.

 Beautiful work on all of these!  I think my favorite was cellar, both of them a little bit unsure.  Great writing!!!



Author's Response: Well, isn't Fancy modifying Beesly and not New?  Sorry, couldn't resist that one.  Thanks so much for your kind words.  I'm absolutely terrified to write Office fanfic, but words like those make me a little less scared.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2007 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 1

I loved these drabbles!  My favorite was the Porch - I can only imagine how it must feel to finally have something you have wanted for so long.  Very nicely done!

PS I added a disclaimer per the MTT submission guidlines!



Author's Response: Thanks so much!  *Smacks forehead* Sorry about the disclaimer.  I copied them from my fic site which has a general website in the header and completely forgot to put it here.  I'll remember that for the next time.

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2007 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very nice!  I like how you put them all together, rather than making a bunch of chapters.

Cellar and Tapestry are my favorites, and I find Porch kind of fascinating. (like Holy crap, I can have everything I alway wanted - Yikes!) 



Author's Response: Thanks so much!  And, yes, it is a scary thing to realize you can have everything you want as long as you don't do something really stupid.  Thanks for reading!

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