8 [Report This]Date: May 30, 2007 05:16 am Title: Monday
Very entertaining! Just enough Jim/Pam romance. Good work
Date: May 29, 2007 10:21 am Title: Sunday
Karen is just too persistent but then it is Jim Halpert afterall.
Date: May 29, 2007 10:20 am Title: Saturday Evening
I love how he got the DJ to help him out.
Date: May 29, 2007 10:18 am Title: Friday Evening
We have a Shadowbrook Restaruant that is very romantic nearby. I can picture them there now when I drive by :)
Date: May 29, 2007 10:16 am Title: Friday
Can I say, "I hate Karen"?
Date: May 28, 2007 02:26 pm Title: Saturday Evening
Sing! :D I love that song now... and it was only because we heard like that nanosecond in the show... pathetic. Yes.
Yes, this date is a lot better than that first date of theirs where sing played
Author's Response: Wow! I just submitted that chapter like 5 minutes ago! Thanks for the review! :)
Date: May 28, 2007 02:23 pm Title: Friday
What a cute story! Really, after this season, I appreciate a little happy Jim/Pam. :)
Date: May 28, 2007 02:07 pm Title: Saturday
Knoebels is somewhat close to one of my relatives names... Its something with a kn abd a b and an e.
This is a cute story. Fluffy Jam!
Date: May 28, 2007 02:02 pm Title: Friday
Minor thing - first paragraph, morning is mistyped (I do stuff like that also)... just try to catch them before you submit.
Also, in the interaction with Karen, smiled has two m's
Again, its minor, but really, try to catch stuff. I know it turns some readers off.
Now that is one heck of a first date.
Author's Response:
Hey thanks for catching those! I try to read through them before I submit, but sometimes I just miss those...
Oh, and it's not the first date... it's a week after their first date, so which number date it is, is unspecified. :)
Author's Response:
I am SUCH a dork! I just now realized you were talking about Pam remembering the first date! haha! That's what I get for looking at the reviews after I finish another section... my brain was not in the right place. lol.
--receptionist
Date: May 28, 2007 11:34 am Title: Friday Evening
Fun!! So neat that Jim had a weekend planned. I love this line from Pam: "Oh, I'll get something" Saucy! (/Ben Franklin)
Date: May 28, 2007 09:11 am Title: Friday
I like it! I was thinking that (fictional) Jim and Pam would probably spend Memorial Day together!
I actually don't think Pam would want to rub her relationship with Jim in Karen's face, although I don't mind seeing it in a fic. I love the little prank they're working on involving Andy, Dwight, and the Russian group; your Andy there is really good.
I'm curious as to why Karen is still lingering around her car... I hope she's not up to something.
I look forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Well, in my opinion (and my ultimate fantasy version of JAM), Pam is finally seeing that it doesn't matter what other people think. That, and I was thinking of the moment in the break room when Pam told Karen that she had wanted to give her little speech for a while (right before Karen calls her a bitch).
I enjoyed writing the terrorism conspiracy. That was fun. :)
Karen was just being... Karen. She knew that Jim and Pam were going down together, and she was just being angry, bitter, vindictive Karen. She was waiting by her car because she wanted to make Jim feel guilty. But then, when Jim still kissed Pam, knowing Karen was there, it only made her go deeper into her self-pity and bitterness.
And I just finished the enxt chapter right now! It's not so funnt, but it is cute (tooting my own horn there...). The next chapter ("Saturday") will be a bit funnier, I hope. They go to an amusement park...
Enjoy!
10 [Report This]Date: May 28, 2007 04:40 am Title: Friday
It made me feel giddy! I'm loving this. The whole Dwight/Andy plot is really authentic, it really feels like it would fit in the show. And the email exchanges are perfect - I want to read their whole week of email exchanges!!
My favourite line, so perfect, has to be: "You know I'm right."
I love it, please post more!