Date: October 01, 2008 10:57 am Title: Chapter 1
How a story this wonderful can only have 7 reviews is a crime! I love this story. I've probably read it 4 times and was ashamed to see I'd not reviewed it yet. I remember the first time, I actually didn't see the twist coming till almost the very end. Thanks so much for sharing it!
Date: May 29, 2007 09:16 am Title: Chapter 1
Okay, this is the first, last aka only fanfic I am going to read before I start doing stuff today (really more stuff since I just got off work)... but I have attempted to read this fic two other times now, and real life just kept getting in the way, and I am determined to make it through!
You don't claim ownership of the alphabet? what about punctuation marks... because I think mr owner of quotation marks may come out of his grave and sue you... unless he is a JAM fan, and then maybe not...
Wow, I love this story. I mean, seriously. So great. It is so cute and funny, and it is happy JAM and they are totally meant to be, and I kinda thought so, but then I was like, well, why isn't Pam saying anything, and :D. So glad I finally got the chance to read this...
Yikes! I thought I had everything covered. Now I have to worry about semicolons, which, lets face it, nobody wants to do. Mr. Smiley face and Mr. Angry face will be after me, it's just too much stress. I knew I should have stuck with Peanuts fanfiction. Then I'd only be worrying about periods, question marks, and exclamation points.
Thanks for reviewing and I'm glad you liked it. It's kinda high on the fluff factor but I wanted to write something with minimal angst before I got into my next story.
Date: May 28, 2007 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
I suspected where the story was headed, but that made it no less a pleasure to read.
My favorite detail was how the church camp decided to make Jim the ultimate example, with "666" demerits. Hee--and so true. My friends got kicked out of a summer camp one year (but I and some others didn't get caught), and then a couple of years later I worked as a camp couselor at the same place. In job training, the management unwittingly told us the story of our own friends as "the ultimate cautionary tale." I love the thought that Jim and Pam would be the ultimate cautionary tale for their camp, too. They totally would.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. What can I say, the road to Dunder Mifflin is paved with good intentions but small stumbles.
Date: May 28, 2007 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
I absolutely loved this story. I read it quickly this morning and have been thinking about it all day. 'Cute' doesn't seem like a strong enough word to describe it, but it's just an adorably cute story! While I'd guessed the outcome before the end, I did have to go back and reread Pam's reaction to Jim's initial description of his camp experience. I really loved that you were able to write it in a way that I, like Jim, missed the signs at first. SO great!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review and I'm glad you liked the story.
Date: May 28, 2007 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
I seriously got chills at the end. Awesome.
Really glad you liked it. It really means a lot when someone says they really like your stuff. I want to get better as a writer and all, but seriously, I live for people saying things like this about what I've scribbled.
Date: May 28, 2007 11:21 am Title: Chapter 1
Pamela Jean! I knew it! Love the Roy parallel, too. OMG, this is adorable. Their kids are going to be trouble!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I know it was kind of obvious, but I felt it fit with the characters. Now, of course their kids will have to prank the Shrute clan long before they ever make it to camp.
Date: May 28, 2007 09:34 am Title: Chapter 1
Awww. I just love this. I was wondering how Jim wouldn't remember the girl was named Pam, and then you came out with PJ.
This is so nice. I love that Jim has only loved Pam, that he had to look up in the dictionary some of the things they were accused of doing, that they stole a car and drove to Scranton, their late nights talking and having fun in their own cabin, the lawsuit mention (ha!), the whole description of camp, the counselors naked in the dining hall (ha!)...
There are just so many wonderful things about this fic.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for taking the time to review my story. And I really appreciate the kind words.