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Reviewer: BaraJam Signed [Report This]
Date: June 18, 2007 02:57 am Title: burn

Yeah I think an epilogue might be good to wrap things up, since I'm a little lost as to what exactly you were trying to convey in the last chapter beyond that they told each other everything and went to NYC anyway...right?

Author's Response: hmm. Sorry if this was a little confusing! They're on their way to tell Corporate about Karen and Toby. :)

Reviewer: Donnelly Signed [Report This]
Date: June 17, 2007 01:37 pm Title: burn

love it, of course. you must write an epiloge.

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