10 [Report This]Date: June 03, 2007 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 3
I just got back from a wedding, and this is almost as romantic as anything I heard this weekend.
(I have to say "almost" because it was my little brother's wedding. But this gives him real competition. Does that mean I'm a bad person? Yes, probably. Does it mean you're a good writer? Yes, absolutely.)
I love the serious stuff, the angst and the romance. But I also love how you work understated humor in, like so: "Pam knew that her presence in the warehouse would probably not be a good thing. It would mean boys showing off and pushing themselves. It would also mean sweaty Jim in shorts and a t-shirt. She brought her lunch." I look forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Glad you like the story since I came up with it while writing a response to one of your reviews. Hope you like the next bit
8 [Report This]Date: June 03, 2007 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 3
Thanks Malcolm. Seeing a new chapter of Heart of the Matter made my day. Once again, well written and leaves me wanting more.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, glad you like how the story is going
Date: June 02, 2007 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 3
This story is really amazing. Heart wrenching? Yes. But really lovely. I enjoy the way you've brought the office together here, and I think your background story for Jim is really believable. Great work, but update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review a story by an NC State grad. Hope you like the next bits
Date: June 02, 2007 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 3
I'm relieved that Jim should probably be okay, and that he and Karen weren't dating!! Is it terrible that both of those things are almost equally important to me?
I LOVE the Angela hug paragraph. Gorgeous.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Angela is always fun to write.