Date: June 07, 2007 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 4
So they teach you to write over at NC State? Totally kidding. :-)
Great Chapter! I love that Pam wants him to understand she decided all this best she knew. AND I love how she explains to him that she made such a scene. You've really done well with Michael. And you're so right, you know Michael would take her clothes off, to make her more comfortable. funny thing, I believe his motives would be honestly pure. Keep it coming.
Author's Response:
In the interest of accuracy, they didn't teach me to write at NC State. My older sister, the future Carolina grad, taught me so I would quit bugging her to read my comic books aloud. It's a secret shame.
Glad you liked the last bit. I thought Michael probably saw this in an old movie and thought it was the thing to do. It probably wasn't until he got her blouse off that he might have wondered if this was the best idea, and by then he was already committed (and should be).
Date: June 05, 2007 06:43 am Title: Chapter 4
HA! I like the comic relief at the end of this v. heavy chapter. This is a really compelling story -- looking forward to more.
Author's Response: glad you enjoyed it. I hope you like the next bit
Date: June 04, 2007 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 4
malcom, you had me until Pam's blouse and skirt had been removed. Ewww! Plus, no matter how tired she was, unless she were drugged, she'd pretty much wake up when someone's taking off her clothes. Double Ewww.
I love the rest of it! These lines are fantastic: I want to be with you, whether it's for two days or fifty years. So get over yourself and tell me you love me or I'm calling a cab.
How is it that you've just appeared on the scene, and your so prolific? Were you writing elsewhere? Are there more malcom lake fics somewhere waiting for me to read them? (Please add 'Question:' in front of all those to be in keeping with the spirit of The Office. Thanks.)
Anyway, great job!
Author's Response:
I expected some folks would think the Michael bit was over the top (no pun intended). Sometimes you just write something that strikes you as funny and you can't resist throwing it in. Especially for me, since I have a job and most of my writing is done late at night.
I've got some Buffy stories over at fanfiction.net. My favorite is a short one called the sisters, but my best reviews are for a long story called higher education and abandoned buildings.