Date: June 18, 2007 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 7
You did a terrific job with the different characters here. They each seemed very true to themselves, even in such an AU setting. I could really see Phyllis and Kelly acting just like that. And Kev's list - wow.
Karen was obviously different, but I was thinking what a missed oppty she was in the actual show. I would have liked to have seen Pam and Karen interact like this in real life.
Keep it up.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, and I'm glad you liked this part. The Kev bit was the most fun to write. The hardest thing was deciding the songs to leave off.
Date: June 18, 2007 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 7
I just got caught up with this story. and I really like it. It's interesting to see how the Office characters interact in a more dramatic setting. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Glad you like it and thanks for reviewing. I wanted to try something a little more "grown up" but hopefully it's in the spirit of the show.
9 [Report This]Date: June 17, 2007 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 7
I liked Pam's interaction with Karen in this chapter. I really don't think Karen is a crazy bitch, so I appreciate any story where she is realistic and not totally insane. I'm a little concerned about Jim in this one. Is he up to something? He seems a little cagey.
Author's Response: One thing I am sure of is that Karen will not go crazy during the course of the story. Beyond that, we'll just have to see. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: June 17, 2007 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 7
The part with Karen was interesting. At first, it seemed like she was going to tell Pam she was going after him too...
I think Pam should've met Jim and his mom at Jim's apartment. I would've been all over that. (Um, in a totally heart-healthy innocent way. Yep.) I still don't trust Karen. A nice Thai dinner with Pam is not making me trust this rendition of Karen...
The Kevin bit was great.
I'm curious to see what will happen with Michael and Jim.
Author's Response: Glad you liked the Kevin bit, it was fun for me. We'll have to see how Karen ends up in this story, haven't made up my mind yet either, normally the story kind of tells me how folks should behave
Date: June 17, 2007 01:11 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oh and I love the list of songs from Kev, good details!
Author's Response:
Yeah, I kinda figures Kevin wouldn't have anything from the past decade on his playlist. Besides, I enjoy playing music snob.
Date: June 17, 2007 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 7
Loving it! Does not suck in any way.
I love how this story somehow keeps building up. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I always get nervous when I post a new chapter. Will try to update soon