Date: June 23, 2007 10:49 am Title: Chapter 8
Ok, great story so far...but what the heck is up with Karen?
She's freaking me out!
luchy
Author's Response: Sorry to freak you out. Hopefully now Karen's actions are more reasonable.
Date: June 21, 2007 12:27 am Title: Chapter 8
Okay serious audible gasp here. Please tell me there's more coming soon.
Author's Response: Hopefully the gasp will turn into a happy sigh now. Sorry this took a while, but I wanted to get through everything to make sure there weren't a lot of questions going into the last chapter.
Date: June 20, 2007 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 8
I'm assuming this Karen thing is some kind of good natured prank? Or is it? Hmmmm......
I like that you even made me feel jealous when Karen was helping Jim in the office. But when Pam and Jim drove to her apartment, there was a real feeling of comfort and security between them in that scene. Well done.
I love the idea of Pam taking care of him of course. Oh yeah, I also love his mom here, good characterization!
Love that you're still going strong here. Good work.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing. I hope i've cleared up Karen's motives in a way that makes sense, but you guys will be the judge of that.
9 [Report This]Date: June 20, 2007 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 8
Great chapter. I like how you're setting up some interesting twists and turns.
Eagerly anticipting the next chapteer
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Hope you like the latest developments
Date: June 20, 2007 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 8
Can't wait to see what Karen is up to. I love the way you write Larissa. She's a great mom.
Author's Response: Larissa is a lot of fun. Hope you like the bit with her in this chapter. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: June 20, 2007 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 8
Wow, this just took a real turn! Andy and Karen in cahoots, Jim being Mr. Responsible, Karen kind of coming on to Jim, Andy, and Pam...Yikes!
What is going to happen next!?
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Hope you're okay with the way the story's turning out - ml