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Reviewer: Desslok Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 01, 2008 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 10

Great story. Very touching and sweet. I really enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: July 05, 2007 07:09 am Title: Chapter 10

Nice ending, malcom lake!

Andy will never fall for a "let's have a threesome, you start without us" line again.  Well, maybe he would.

I love the whole frying pan conversation.  Lovely and realistic.

I like how you slip in little things like Angela actually eating some of the food, but complaining about the amount of pepper.  That Angela has to complain about something. 

I'll watch for your next story! 

Reviewer: larrymcg Signed [Report This]
Date: July 04, 2007 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 10

Great conclusion to an excellent story. I really enjoyed this. Thanks!

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