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Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: June 01, 2007 06:48 pm Title: Waking Up and Starting Over: Departure

“I realized that we’re not living in the year 1950 and that I should get out of this god damned relationship!” she cried up at him. - What a great line!!!

This is very good.  It's so interesting how Pam has let herself be taken care of all this time, and now she has nothing.  If she had married him years and years ago, when she still loved him, it would be a different story.

Glad to see more will come soon. 

Reviewer: Beth Signed [Report This]
Date: June 01, 2007 05:00 pm Title: Waking Up and Starting Over: Departure

Aww I love how Roy is about to beg for her to stay.  I love how you write Pam as so determined.  I can't wait to see what happens with her in New York!!

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