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Reviewer: the_squirrel Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2007 10:42 pm Title: New York, New Life: Guy Talk

i really like how jim was married, but was he married to karen? hmm? i cant wait to see.

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2007 10:04 pm Title: New York, New Life: Guy Talk

Great chapter!  Curious!  Who was Jim's wife?  Was it Karen?  I'm glad it's an ex-wife, and not a current one.

I look forward to the next chapter, but fear no rocks from this direction.  And hey, isn't this the 2nd chapter in one day?  Apology not... accepted. Because it wasn't even necessary in the first place. (/Andy)

Reviewer: nbyevu Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2007 08:57 pm Title: New York, New Life: Guy Talk

AH! Jim was married. That was a shocker I did not expect. Hence my usage of the word "shocker." I just hope Jim's ability to be the absolute perfect man (as I imagine him) was not spoiled by his first wife!

Reviewer: angie Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2007 08:20 pm Title: New York, New Life: Guy Talk

ooooh it's getting interesting now.  "The divorce"?  I like long chapters - it's good for story development.  keep going!

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