Date: June 06, 2007 03:45 pm Title: Changes in the Weather: Pranks and Opinions
I lovelovelove this story! Your characterizations are spot-on! I'm so excited to see where you take this story! One teeny thing-- 'irregardless' isn't a word-- 'regardless' never needs the ir- prefix. Can't wait for more updates!
Author's Response:
Oops. :/ Usually non-words don't slip through, but every once in a while they find a way of rearing their sneaky little heads, haha.
Thanks for the feedback! I'm glad that you're enjoying the story!
Date: June 06, 2007 08:58 am Title: Changes in the Weather: Pranks and Opinions
I definitely enjoyed Michael in this! Ryan is kind of a tool here, but not any more than sometimes on the show. I really liked Michael drawing the flames - hah!
10 [Report This]Date: June 06, 2007 06:58 am Title: Changes in the Weather: Pranks and Opinions
i'm really loving this story so far!
Date: June 05, 2007 09:18 pm Title: Changes in the Weather: Pranks and Opinions
I adore this story! I don't know what it is but seeing them all in a totally different setting is sweet, refreshing and completely awesome. I've read so many post-The Job fics that this is a nice change. Please keep it up as quickly as possible. I get excited to see what will happen next. :-)
Date: June 05, 2007 08:29 pm Title: Changes in the Weather: Pranks and Opinions
Awww ......Poor Jim. So is Karen his ex? Ohhhh the plot thickens.lol I'm thrilled you posted another part. You spoil us readers!I read that there will be another one tomorrow morning?O I can't wait! The Seaseme Set is hilarious! Can't wait for the next part, I like how things are developing between Jim and Pam, at a nice even pace, very realistic. Great job.
Date: June 05, 2007 08:12 pm Title: Changes in the Weather: Pranks and Opinions
Have I mentioned how much I am enjoying this story? Because it's quite a bit.
10 [Report This]Date: June 05, 2007 07:29 pm Title: Changes in the Weather: Pranks and Opinions
So I typically don't review/reply to stories. But I felt that I absolutely had to send you a quick note on this one!
I don't know if it's the AU in the midst of all the post "The Job" stories, or what... But I'm REALLY enjoying this! I like that you have kept true to Dwight kookiness, but you haven't made him quite so annoying...
I don't know, I just wanted you to know that I'm THOROUGHLY enjoying it!
Author's Response: Aw! Thank you for commenting on my story! :) I feel special now! Haha, I'm glad that you're enjoying it!
Date: June 05, 2007 06:56 pm Title: Changes in the Weather: Pranks and Opinions
Another great one! I love when Jim and Michael bond. Ryan is kind of a douchebag (excuse the language) in this story. Well I guess he's kind of a douche in real life too (and by "real life" i mean the show), huh. So good for you I Know This Much Is True...staying faithful to character traits!
Author's Response:
I was a little afraid about Ryan's character in this story. I mean, I realize that I made him a bit of a douche, but I also feel that if he spoke up more on the actual show (and if maybe the show were broadcasted on HBO or something) that he would be a little bit on the jerky side.
Glad you liked it! :)
10 [Report This]Date: June 05, 2007 06:54 pm Title: Changes in the Weather: Pranks and Opinions
Thanks for the two posts in one day! I really love this story. I can't wait until he asks Pam out! I love that there is kind of a rich versus poor element to this story. I find it so cute that none of this crosses Jim's mind. I can't wait to hear more about Jim and his divorce! Great job with this chapter!