Date: June 06, 2007 04:37 pm Title: Changes in the Weather: Strawberry Fields
I'm kind of late to the party, but just chiming in to say that you've got me hooked and I really love where this is going. Kudos!
Date: June 06, 2007 04:36 pm Title: Changes in the Weather: Strawberry Fields
Well another amazing chapter. Will Jim ever find out the perks of living above a bakery?lol. The dialog is spot on, it definetly flows just the show itself. I hope you will post another chapter. I promise if you do I'll leave feedback! lol....then again even if you posted tomorrow I still would leave feedback. this is an awesome story. We can't have you facing writers block! Anything we can do to help let us know, plus I love Central Park is amazing! I love strawberry field (I'm a huge beatles fan!)
Sincerly,
Always wanting more
10 [Report This]Date: June 06, 2007 11:31 am Title: Changes in the Weather: Strawberry Fields
Aw, yay! A date! I'm really interested to see how the gala turns out...hopefully for the best. I love it when you update, so please do it again soon!
Date: June 06, 2007 10:59 am Title: Changes in the Weather: Strawberry Fields
I really love this story. I check the site multiple times a day to see if there's more. :) Beautifully written. Can't wait for their date!
Date: June 06, 2007 10:08 am Title: Changes in the Weather: Strawberry Fields
Then... it's a date. Hooray!
Although, Jim... an hour early? For shame. Give a girl time to take a shower and shave her legs.
Good chapter!
Date: June 06, 2007 09:15 am Title: Changes in the Weather: Strawberry Fields
Very much enjoyed that chapter!
As a New Yorker though, just wanted to say something on the lingo. We never refer to any distance as miles. We say everything in blocks or neighborhoods. So, since a couple of miles is around 30 blocks or so, we wouldn't refer to that in blocks, we would say "this great restaurant in Soho" (or the Village, or the Lower East Side, etc...)
Do I make any sense? Sorry, just wanted to throw in my New York lingo lesson... :) Anyway questions about the city, feel free to ask!
Author's Response:
Yes, that makes perfect sense. :) I'll try and use blocks from now on (since I know nothing of New York City neighborhoods). Being from the Midwest, I automatically refer to everything in miles, haha.
Date: June 06, 2007 08:52 am Title: Changes in the Weather: Strawberry Fields
great chapter! hoping for another soonn