Date: January 16, 2010 02:42 pm Title: Changes in the Weather: Crazy but Harmless
Hey there, so I've been reading the whole story here, I started yesterday and this is amazing! I've just wanted to stay in the AU world that you've created for Jim and Pam and then give you a really long review at the end. I hope you don't mind.
The reason, though that I'm leaving you this review now, is that dress you described Karen's dress in Phyllis's wedding? Just curious here... Also, I love the character of Dwight, and it's so nice that you've toned him down quite a bit, he still does have those strange Dwight tendencies but he's not the same as on the show, I hope you understand what I mean! And I love Jim, and I understand that he's not using Pam as a prostitute or something like that, but why does he keep giving Pam SO MUCH MONEY??? It's a lot! Is it his way of showing Pam how much he likes her? Lastly, I hope we hear about this ex-wife lady of Jim's, I'm getting curious! Great story, and I'm going to keep reading, then read the sequel!
Date: July 07, 2007 08:07 pm Title: Changes in the Weather: Crazy but Harmless
I LOVE that you used "Creed Thoughts" for Creed's lines! I laughed so hard!!! Ok, on to the next chapter... :)
Date: June 11, 2007 04:04 pm Title: Changes in the Weather: Crazy but Harmless
HA! Creed is awesome! Love the gypsy bit!
Date: June 06, 2007 08:10 pm Title: Changes in the Weather: Crazy but Harmless
Nice touch adding Creed to the mix of characters. The dress sounds a little bit like the one Pam wore to Phyllis's wedding. Can't wait to find out more about Jim's divorce. Not sure who I'm expecting his ex to be, Karen is the obvious choice but Jan could be really interesting.
Can't wait - thanks for the second installment today.
Date: June 06, 2007 08:02 pm Title: Changes in the Weather: Crazy but Harmless
Hmmm....angst adds to this already amazing story, but there will be fluff at the middle and end correct? lol. I love Crazy Creed!! then again who doesn't? Will we be reading more into Jim's job? hope so, but i like how you are integrating all the characters into the story arc. superb.
Sincerly,
fluff-a-nutter
Date: June 06, 2007 07:35 pm Title: Changes in the Weather: Crazy but Harmless
Can I just say that I actually like Dwight in this story. I mean i LOVE Dwight on the show because...well.....he's Dwight. But this Dwight is so close to normal it's ridiculous...I love him. And Pam. And Kelly. And Creed. And this story!!
Date: June 06, 2007 07:32 pm Title: Changes in the Weather: Crazy but Harmless
I like Creed as the crazy guy and how Kelly just popped up!
I'm curious to see where you go with this.