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Reviewer: pinkiepie172 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 27, 2007 12:02 pm Title: Calm Before the Storm: Souvenirs

This is such a cute story and chapter. I wish I could write stories as well as you! Great Job!! I loved the HB JH thing on the cupcake!!  :o)

Reviewer: Alamos Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09, 2007 07:02 pm Title: Calm Before the Storm: Souvenirs

Your boredom... helped my boredom tonight... Off to read the next chapter

Reviewer: cbk145 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09, 2007 06:30 am Title: Calm Before the Storm: Souvenirs

Keep these coming!

Reviewer: Mad Hatter Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2007 10:09 pm Title: Calm Before the Storm: Souvenirs

awwwwww.......I love fluff!! this was a fantastic chapter! I can just imagine the possiblities of the calligraphy set. Will Jim ever see the abstract art that pam created? i honestly thought that, that was goin to be the art she wouldgive him. I'm glad you posted tonight or rather last night. Is Pam going to throw Jim a party? The great thing about this story is that there are so many possibilities to go with. You're doing an amazing job. I'm just wondering are we gonna see more of Jim's work life, as well as will Pam get to see Jim's place of buisness?especially since Jim has seen Pams, lol. but this was an fantastic chapter, I can't wait to see what you write next!!

sincerly,

your devoted reader

Reviewer: PamPongChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2007 09:23 pm Title: Calm Before the Storm: Souvenirs

I want to leave a longer, more intelligent reviews than my normal babbling kelly-esque ones.

I was thinking about this story all night and how incredibly amazing it is.  I thought about the idea of Jim Halpert as this suave businessman living all alone in the city, spending Christmas by himself in another country and it seriously upset me.  In the most perfect way of course.  You made me want the simple things for him, where in the show you almost want him to have the swanky job and the fancy apartment...but here, you wish him cupcakes.  And Pam.  Of course Pam.

I am so completely in love with this world you've created.  Awesome awesome awesome... 

Reviewer: jinx Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2007 08:42 pm Title: Calm Before the Storm: Souvenirs

You do 'fluff' very, very well.

Author's Response: Aw thanks! You're too sweet! :)

Reviewer: nbyevu Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2007 08:00 pm Title: Calm Before the Storm: Souvenirs

Ahh, an explanation of the title. I loved this chapter. The line where Pam asks to be Jim's boyfriend is pretty funny. Oh, I just love love love this story.

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2007 07:48 pm Title: Calm Before the Storm: Souvenirs

Wonderful!!  I loved how Pam wanted to be his boyfriend!  So cute.  I love the touch also about how she's always paint-smeared when he comes over.

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