Date: June 11, 2007 08:53 am Title: Calm Before the Storm: Heat of Winter
They're not in love with each other yet? (Not yet, give it time.)
This was my favorite exchange from this chapter:
“Are you religious?”
“Not really.”
“That’s what I thought.”
I really enjoyed that!Hmm...angst coming up, ey? I'm guessing the ex-wife is coming around again.
Date: June 10, 2007 12:44 pm Title: Calm Before the Storm: Heat of Winter
Great chapter. Pam seems to be pursuing him more. I like that. Great job with the lovin, not over the top and not to little. Of course I can't wait for more fluff to return.
Date: June 10, 2007 08:04 am Title: Calm Before the Storm: Heat of Winter
I loved this chapter (and the last one)! They just make me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. Bring on the angst, the story's good either way.
Date: June 10, 2007 06:35 am Title: Calm Before the Storm: Heat of Winter
I'm loving this story as a whole
Date: June 10, 2007 06:19 am Title: Calm Before the Storm: Heat of Winter
Yep, you're my favorite person today too. This was sweet and I liked that it was just a little awkward.
Date: June 10, 2007 01:06 am Title: Calm Before the Storm: Heat of Winter
Oh boy youve got more for us?? seriously? this story is just amazing. I envy your ability to update quickly and to have such a drawn out plot...I mean 18 chapters and you've still got more? I'm so very impressed.
Author's Response: I'm not going to lie. I surprised myself with the 18 chapters (and actually, I have up to 25 so far). I have no idea when I'm going to end...unfortunately, I also don't know how I'm going to end it. I keep getting these new ideas that pushes that ending back a little bit more! :/ Haha! I'm glad that you're enjoying it though, as long as you readers don't tire of it, I can keep going. :)
Date: June 09, 2007 10:48 pm Title: Calm Before the Storm: Heat of Winter
I just spent the whole night reading all 18 chapters and this story is brilliant.
You have captured the essence of Jim and Pam so well. This is one of the best AU fics I've ever read.
I'm so excited to see what will happen next.
PS: I love that Karen is the wicked witch!
Date: June 09, 2007 10:27 pm Title: Calm Before the Storm: Heat of Winter
Loved, loved, loved everything from the first kiss (do wonderfully descriptive I could feel it) to 'I think I could too'.
Do you want to go upstairs? Absolutely I do. Sweet and sexy hot at the same time.
The really off part of me was waiting for Jim to say 'Victory to the forces of democratic freedom' when he came. Makes no sense in this story but it's and inside John Krasinski thing.
Date: June 09, 2007 09:10 pm Title: Calm Before the Storm: Heat of Winter
O DAMN! WOW! Ya you definetly out did yourself with this chapter. That wa amazing! lol so perfectly written and I got to the end and I'm thinking yes there will be more fluff and then I read your author's note. Why?!?1 who really needs agnst? not me....nope! lol but wow, I'm looking forward to what you have planned for us next. I'm just hoping for some JAM moments at Jim's work. I don't know what it is but i think there should definetly be some moments between Jim and Pam in his office. Ithink it must be the whole power and dominance thing but it could definetly add some sexual tension. But yes just simple..................wow.
and now I will be taking a cold shower.