Date: January 16, 2010 03:49 pm Title: Calm Before the Storm: Poison
That was really good, I love how you decided to give them a little turn of events. It seemed so realistic, even though he was so drunk, which was out of custom. Great chapter, and I can't wait to see how you continue!
Date: June 11, 2007 09:01 am Title: Calm Before the Storm: Poison
Wow. That's one of the lousiest ex-wives ever. And, yes, it does make sense Jim would tell Pam. He's hurting right now, plus, she should know what she's getting into.
I like "I don't have sex with drunken men"!
Date: June 10, 2007 03:33 pm Title: Calm Before the Storm: Poison
I really really liked this chapter. I still don't understand why Karen would be able to get any of his money legally. I mean, SHE cheated on him and had was pregnant with a child that WASN'T his during their marriage. He should be getting her money.
Date: June 10, 2007 01:18 pm Title: Calm Before the Storm: Poison
I am so hooked on your story and anxiously await each new chapter! I am not a big fan of angst but as long as it ends in JAM fluff I will be a happy reader!
Date: June 10, 2007 01:07 pm Title: Calm Before the Storm: Poison
Way to go Pam, way to be there for Jim. I really like to stuory and how fast you update these chapters. I like how Jim thought he was still going to get lucky that night.
Date: June 10, 2007 12:50 pm Title: Calm Before the Storm: Poison
So that was.......intense! But definelty needed. I like how Pam was able to be there for Jim. It just shows how they are in a mature realtionship.
Now on to Karen............... What a f#@%$&* B$%&*@!!! OoOoOoOo you gt the perfect man and you cheat on him? O i don't think so. Can you write a Pam, Karen smack down? Pretty Pretty Please??!?! Someone needs to show Karen she is not all that with a bag of Herr's potato chips! lol. It seems like it is Karen's MO to find a wealthy man, use and abuse him and move along to the need sucka. Her poor child! Jim needs to stand up to her and be like B&*^$ Get Your Own Damn Money! She cheated on JIM! JIM!!!! she shouldn't be able to get a dime from him!!
So bravo and well done. I could easily continue on about the evilness of Karen and how Jim needs to grow a bigger set and not take this lying down(thats what she said!sorry couldn't help myself.) But I'm getting off track. Such a great chapter. I'm excited to read what will happen next so please post more soon!!
Date: June 10, 2007 12:28 pm Title: Calm Before the Storm: Poison
I am very relieved. I was so worried it was going to be all sordid with like kids and money laundering and all kinds of mess...phew.
also, I felt queasy the entire chapter thinking about all that stinking tequila....uuugggh. bad times.
Date: June 10, 2007 11:11 am Title: Calm Before the Storm: Poison
I promise I will never hurt you. Knowing there are more angsty chapters ahead, this line has a rather ominous tone to me. Another man's baby! Seriously, Karen, WTF! Awesome job, yet again