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Reviewer: Pamela Beesley Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 12:06 pm Title: Calm Before the Storm: Reassurance

I'm really glad you didn't cut this chapter.  It definitely added to the story, as well as showcased the supportive element of Pam's relationships.    Awesome.

Reviewer: albie_ Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 12:04 pm Title: Calm Before the Storm: Reassurance

Gah, ever since you started hinting at the angst and well, naming the chapters "calm before the storm", I click for new chapters with anticipation and dread. Because oh man, I don't even think I can imagine the shit that will hit the fan. Even this lovely filler chapter, all i read was, "Oh, JIm won't be there, will he?!?!?" Hee.  But I'm loving it all, to be honest. I really adore this universe that you've created and how you've developed the characters and inserted them into this storyline. Wonderful writing style. I look forward to more! And thank you for updating so often. You spoil us completely. 

Reviewer: nbyevu Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 11:53 am Title: Calm Before the Storm: Reassurance

Well I'm guessing that that is a giveaway that he is NOT coming to the art show.

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 09:39 am Title: Calm Before the Storm: Reassurance

Oh, very nice!  I'm glad you left this in.

I think it's a good idea to NOT project what's going to happen in the chapters via the notes.  

Isn't that read count wonderful?  Congrats on how many people are reading and reviewing! 

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