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Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2007 11:02 pm Title: To the Place Where I Belong

"They were finally where they belonged."  Lovely story - so romantic and sweet . Thanks.

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2007 08:28 am Title: To the Place Where I Belong

Very sweet and I could so see them on swings together.

Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: June 03, 2007 11:07 am Title: To the Place Where I Belong

Sigh.  So pretty.  I pet you, pretty story.

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 03, 2007 08:13 am Title: To the Place Where I Belong

It was really nice to read "the date" from a Jim point of view.  Well done.

Reviewer: kells8995 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 03, 2007 07:54 am Title: To the Place Where I Belong

**sigh** I love your writing.  Seriously I do.  It's not over the top or too dramatic - it has nice touches and it is so easy to picture Jim and Pam in your writing - you've really found their voices.  

Reviewer: Stilla Signed [Report This]
Date: June 03, 2007 07:10 am Title: To the Place Where I Belong

Ok, seriously? Please keep going. You have a wonderful touch with them, and the way you DON'T have a heavy hand at weaving in some of the cannon is a much-needed thing in these stories.
And we have months to go. MONTHS.

Reviewer: Inanna3 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 03, 2007 06:17 am Title: To the Place Where I Belong

Finally! This is exactly the story I was waiting for. I've read a ton of first-date fic, some of it quite good, but there was always something missing. Turns out, this is what was missing. Great job.

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