10 [Report This]Date: February 19, 2008 04:43 pm Title: I Bet You Look Good on the Dance Floor
There was nothing uninteresting about the backstory... I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work ;-)
10 [Report This]Date: February 19, 2008 06:55 am Title: I Bet You Look Good on the Dance Floor
I am usually very critical of AU pieces because sometimes the author will skip over the most important parts like the back story and just get to the physical side of a certain paring's physical relationship but you have not with this story! You're doing a great job with describing James' heartbreak over Matilda's new relationship with Robert! The only thing that confused me was James' mother's name was Alice but then she was known as Abbey when you described her pregnancy and eventual death. Was that her nickname or did I miss something in an earlier chapter? But overall, this is one of my favorites! keep up the great work!
Author's Response: You didn't miss anything, rather you caught my last minute name change. Maybe I should rename her Dwigt? Thanks for the feedback, and the eagle eye.
10 [Report This]Date: February 19, 2008 06:55 am Title: I Bet You Look Good on the Dance Floor
Oooohhhhh, I loooove this story so much!! I can't wait for more!
Date: February 19, 2008 05:39 am Title: I Bet You Look Good on the Dance Floor
I absolutely love this story. A little of the "good old days" is definitely what I need right now. Although I'm guessing since we're circa 1940, it won't be good for long. But whatever. I'll take what I can get :)