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Reviewer: kaystar Signed 
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Date: June 15, 2007 08:43 pm Title: Not a Good Start
8 [Report This]Date: June 15, 2007 08:43 pm Title: Not a Good Start
Wow. After all the waiting and yearning, Jim blows it with his first question. I love how you said "his mouth said" as though Jim wasn't connected to the ill-timed question!
Reviewer: kgarrett Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2007 01:45 pm Title: Not a Good Start
Date: June 10, 2007 01:45 pm Title: Not a Good Start
Oh, sad. But I still like it. it seems like this is what would really happen. They both have to talk about it and get it out of the way. I have though though that Jim and Pam will get through this.
Reviewer: jinx Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: June 06, 2007 11:23 am Title: Not a Good Start
8 [Report This]Date: June 06, 2007 11:23 am Title: Not a Good Start
I'm liking it. I've been thinking the subject of their silence once Roy and Pam were over had to come up pretty early. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take Jim and Pam from here.