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Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: June 15, 2007 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

This sounded like an actual episode - you have everyone's voices really down.  I was so afraid that Kelly was going to say that Karen and Jim eloped so it was a wonderful surprise that they actually broke up instead. And I love Kevin telling Pam he had her back during her confrontation with Karen.  And being asked out by a hot firefighter, ooh la la. Having been married to my own hot firefighter for many years I can understand the attraction.

Reviewer: Fleeceitout Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09, 2007 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow! You really captured the real essence of Jim and Pam- Please keep writing- I cant wait to read what happens next!!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks!  And I think I will.  I'm not sure yet but maybe :)

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2007 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ah, it shall be good when it starts with Dwight saying Question. I used to do that a lot like Dwight (say Question then ask it)... but now every time I do I think of Dwight and catch myself most times...

I can agree with Pam and not having money. I make my lunch (a simple PB and J), daily. And my brother always asks why I don't just buy my lunch at the pool (where I work)... and I say its too expensive. And what is worse about that is a full lunch there costs two dollars! Two fifty if I get a snack. But that is just a daily expense I can't afford. I am jealous of those who can! I figure one day I will splurge and get it... maybe a last day of summer treat.

"Is the building going to burn down soon?" Ryan asked, a hopeful glint in his eyes.
Haha!!!

They broke up! Awesomeness!

Well, I know I spend too much time with kids, but I read coffee at Dora's and I thought Dora the Explorer!

This was a sweet story. Enjoyed it!



Author's Response:

I do that myself and I find myself doing it even more now and I chuckle because I think of Dwight, too.

You save so much money not taking a lunch.  I've been splurging for a little while now but my bank account is totally yelling at me. :)

 

They HAD to break-up.  I just can not deal with her anymore.  AT ALL.

 

Thanks! 

 

Reviewer: nbyevu Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2007 11:24 am Title: Chapter 1

Two things: (1) If your name is indeed Heather, then we share a name! (2) Would you consider continuing this or writing a sequel? I love it...it's just so sweet and...yea.

Author's Response: 1) Yup, I'm a Heather! ;)  2) I'm thinking about continuing and following the storyline of the show but with this instead.  Maybe.  Thank you very much!

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2007 11:03 am Title: Chapter 1

Very nice!  I think you had the voices down well, and I really liked how Pam's "passive/aggressive" line!

Author's Response: Thanks!  I'm glad you liked it :)

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