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Reviewer: feared_or_loved Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: June 15, 2007 06:32 am Title: The New Order

I love all of this.  Just when you think Ryan's day won't get any worse, it does.  And in such a fantastically calculated way, too.  Nice work.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: June 14, 2007 08:48 pm Title: The New Order

Michael having Jan listening in on speakerphone was brilliant. And a dildo glued to the hood ornament was hilarious! What goes around really does come around.

Reviewer: Cousin Mose Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14, 2007 06:52 pm Title: The New Order

BAHAHA!! you're killing me over here, Night Swept!! Do you hear me?? They're going to find me asphyxiated from laughing to death in my chair, my lap top still open to this story... :) I hope you can live with that. 

Author's Response: This has to be the coolest thing anyone has ever written about a story of mine.  Thanks a bunch.

Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: June 14, 2007 06:17 pm Title: The New Order

How many more ways can Ryan eat it? I can't wait to find out.

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