Date: June 17, 2007 05:59 am Title: Showdown
I have to say that I sincerely hope that nobody ever tries to make your life difficult. From this story, your vengeance would be swift, brutal, and devastatingly efficient. So well done.
Date: June 16, 2007 01:47 pm Title: Showdown
This is just the right touch of nastiness. So awesome. I LOVE LOVE LOVED the Lonny/Darryl scene and Karen & Dwight. And AndyKelly. WOO! I just loved the whole thing. Sequel, please?
Date: June 16, 2007 04:36 am Title: Showdown
*BOOM* The paramedics kick in Mose's front door. He's slumped over in his chair.
"Quick" one of them yells, "Get some oxygen! I'm starting compressions!"
"V-tac!!" the other yells, handing the paddles over. "Charge 250...CLEAR!!"
zzzzzap! "Anything?"
"No! charge 300... CLEAR!!"
zzzzzzap! "Check it again."
"Nothing...he's gone... flatline..."
"What is this on his computer? Looks like some kind of story."
"Let's read it."
*few moments later*
BAHAHAAAHAHA!!!
*thump.....thump* <------sound of both paramedics hitting the floor after dying of laughter as well.
See what you've done here? :)
Author's Response: This has to be the most creative review ever written on this site, and I'm honored that one of my stories was on the receiving end of it. Thanks a lot!
Date: June 16, 2007 02:35 am Title: Showdown
So....Pam isn't really fired???