10 [Report This]Date: July 01, 2007 08:44 pm Title: Before The Fall
I love that you had Pam engaged to someone else! I love Jim and Pam together, but I've read some fics where they have a falling out and don't see each other for years and Pam is always still single in the ones I've read. This is FNB!!! She would absolutely move on to a new guy if she decided to move away to move on, so I love that you portrayed that!
Crossing my fingers that Jim and Pam meet face to face to talk it out.
Date: July 01, 2007 08:23 pm Title: Before The Fall
Wow...if the 6 years twist wasnt a huge one, this DEFINITELY is!!
Date: June 16, 2007 08:25 pm Title: Before The Fall
Wow. 6 years. I think that was a little bit of a drastic move on Pam's part, but hey I'm curious to see what happens next! Update soon please :)
Author's Response: The writers were giving us Bold!Pam towards the end of season 3... so, I continued with the bold Pam who makes very brash decisions, for the sake of the plot. hehe :) Thanks for the review!
Date: June 14, 2007 10:19 pm Title: Before The Fall
Great start. This story really has me hooked. And I love the little cliffhanger ending. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Date: June 14, 2007 06:18 pm Title: Before The Fall
The story description and this moment where his world stopped spinning have both made me *very* tense about what might happen next... I'm preparing myself for pain!
7 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2007 03:16 pm Title: Before The Fall
My minds racing. I won't speculate - suspense is good.
Date: June 13, 2007 02:27 pm Title: Before The Fall
Does Karen walk in? That's gotta suck.
9 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2007 11:48 am Title: Before The Fall
Arrrgh! What a cruel ending. When is the next chapter going to be up? Nice job. I like the 'not everything is rosy' genre, seems more realistic.
Author's Response: The next chapter will hopefully be up tomorrow. I'm glad you like the story so far, and thanks for the review!
Date: June 13, 2007 11:27 am Title: Before The Fall
I kinda hate Jim for not officially ending things with Karen first, but I feel bad for the guy so I'll give 'em a break :) And cliffhangers are the reason I hate/love reading WIPs so post more soon. I need to know what happens next!
Author's Response:
Cliffhangers are kind of evil, aren't they. But more will be up very soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing! I hope you enjoy the rest.
9 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2007 10:44 am Title: Before The Fall
I can't wait to see where this is going! You're off to a great start! More soon please!
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words, more will be up soon!
Date: June 13, 2007 09:48 am Title: Before The Fall
WHAT???????????
that's a really incredible cliffhanger... i'll be sure to read the next chapter. it sounds sad though... i don't want jim to be a jerk :-(
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! I don't want Jim to be a jerk either... so I'll try and do my best to make it as good/realistic as possible. :)
8 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2007 09:41 am Title: Before The Fall
An angsty first date? Years later they're still not together? A cliffhanger. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! More should be up soon, I'm glad you're enjoying it. :)
Date: June 13, 2007 09:24 am Title: Before The Fall
uh oh! does karen walk in?
this is a new twist the "first date" fic, so please continue!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! The next chapter should be up soon!