Date: June 16, 2007 09:01 pm Title: Upside Down
This was good. I'm glad Pam wasn't like, "oh, it's okay Jim. I love you." I feel like the old Pam would have done that. So, angst galore, but I'm looking forward to finding out how Jim fixes this!
Date: June 15, 2007 09:52 am Title: Upside Down
awwww sad. update soon.
Date: June 15, 2007 07:35 am Title: Upside Down
That sucks. Not the story, the story's good, just the situation that Jim got himself into. So next chapter are we jumping back to the present? I want to see them get back together!
8 [Report This]Date: June 15, 2007 07:02 am Title: Upside Down
This is most definately not rosy. She's got to talk to him eventually, right? Karen's disappearance was a little too 'poof' and in that way a little too clean and easy. I'm interested to see how long Pam's shun holds out. Did she take lessons from Dwight?
Author's Response: I know Karen's departure was a little too clean and easy... but when I really think about it, it seems that she's only in Scranton for Jim, she doesn't really love the work or the people. When season 4 starts up next season, I'd be really surprised to see her stay being single and seemingly friendless in a town she doesn't seem to like very much. But that's why I'm not a writer. haha, but I appreciate the review!
Date: June 14, 2007 09:28 pm Title: Upside Down
oh my goodness, please let this have a happy ending!!! but i love your writing, its really realistic!
7 [Report This]Date: June 14, 2007 08:33 pm Title: Upside Down
Oh man, I was afraid of that.
I know you said it was un-betaed and unproofed, may I point out a few things you might want to correct?
“I’ve never been so humiliating in my entire life, Jim - think you meant humilated.
You took me out, you slept with me, all while you had a girlfriend that thought you too were still together - two
He looked out the window and watched her get into a cap - cab
Author's Response:
Thanks for pointing those out to me. I have fixed the ones you pointed out, I'm sorry about that... but I did warn you ;)
9 [Report This]Date: June 14, 2007 08:01 pm Title: Upside Down
This might be 1/2 realistic to season 4 after all do all the Jam fans out there think things will go smoothly for our two heros?
9 [Report This]Date: June 14, 2007 08:01 pm Title: Upside Down
This might be 1/2 realistic to season 4 after all do all the Jam fans out there think things will go smoothly for our two heros?
Date: June 14, 2007 07:59 pm Title: Upside Down
oh holy crap, this is my worst Office nightmare come to life...in fic. haha...a good but depressing idea. I def. had to remember to close my mouth when Karen walked in, by the way...awesome.