Date: July 06, 2007 02:14 pm Title: Revelations
Oh, man. Pam's got some 'splainin to do - I'm not normally very sympathetic with women who keep children secret from the fathers. I know Jim was the one in the wrong at first, but in my eyes this definitely trumps his mistake as far as bad deeds! Very cool surprise, though, and I look forward to seeing how it's resolved.
Date: July 03, 2007 09:43 am Title: Revelations
oh no! Please update soon, the suspense is killing me. I love your writing. I got through these 4 chapters so fast and I can't wait to find out what happens next...hope there's a happy ending for Jim in all this.
Date: July 02, 2007 05:59 am Title: Revelations
oh, so sad -- Jim!!!
This part must be missing a word or something:
The photograph he and Pam that Jim was still holding slipped through his fingers and fell to the ground.
I gather it's a critical detail, no?
8 [Report This]Date: July 02, 2007 05:56 am Title: Revelations
Wow, this is not what I expected. I'm not sure what I expected, but not this. Can't wait to see where this is going.
8 [Report This]Date: July 01, 2007 08:40 pm Title: Revelations
OMG!!!! Seems there's some things that Kelly doesn't know! This is getting really good. Please update soon - gah!!!!
10 [Report This]Date: July 01, 2007 08:38 pm Title: Revelations
Long lost child moments like that always get me...
This is so addictive.
Date: July 01, 2007 07:40 pm Title: Revelations
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH