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Reviewer: Night Swept Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2007 05:34 pm Title: On the Booze Cruise

Great story.  You should write more!

Reviewer: Pixel Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2006 01:08 pm Title: On the Booze Cruise

Nice job! I liked the poem format too. I liked that Pam is happy, but discontent and trying to make herself feel better about that.

Author's Response: Thanks Pixel! By the way, I LOVE Push. She sees options in his eyes is one of my favorite lines ever.

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2006 12:22 am Title: On the Booze Cruise

This is great- nice to hear Pam's POV on Booze Cruise

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. I am sitting here with butterflies hoping I did Pam any justice and that you guys like it.

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