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Reviewer: eagle Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2006 08:55 am Title: You Might As Well Go All In - It's Casino Night

Had to say I loved the part about Jim's lips reaching her before the rest of him does. Lovely observation. It's like he was so impatient he couldn't wait for the rest of him to catch up.

Author's Response: To me it seemed like he had no control over himself at that point, as they say: "The heart wants what it wants"

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