Reviews For Shipwrecked
Reviewer: MissCorporate Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 23, 2023 05:55 am Title: January 19, 2006
Date: February 23, 2023 05:55 am Title: January 19, 2006
I thoroughly enjoyed reading these insights into the tragic Booze Cruise episode. The lawyer jokes and email exchanges were priceless. The only feedback I would give concerns taking care with the dialogue tags and reducing the summary for big scenes. I understand that it's difficult to avoid repetition with that crucial scene in Booze Cruise, but I still thought that some repetition of the events in real-time would be effective for capturing Jim's heartbreak. I am very impressed with all the additional details about Jim's life and Pam as well. The banter was very much in character. Nice on!
Reviewer: Oracabessa Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: August 09, 2006 08:34 pm Title: January 19, 2006
Date: August 09, 2006 08:34 pm Title: January 19, 2006
Just awesome!