1 [Report This]Date: February 07, 2019 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 7
I wish the next existed. Thanks for writing what you did, but it's a shame it's unfinished.
1 [Report This]Date: November 24, 2017 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 7
This is such a good story with a serious cliffhanger of an ending. Wish it continued, but good job before the end.
Date: February 07, 2008 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 7
I'm glad you decided to continue writing this story. It's really good and I'm enjoying it very much.
Date: February 07, 2008 08:17 am Title: Chapter 7
please keep updating! your story is really good, can't wait to read more.
Date: February 06, 2008 08:50 am Title: Chapter 7
Yay! You updated!
Just think, we could have avoided most of S3 with a few bottle of wine, a bucket of margaritas and some Coronas!
8 [Report This]Date: February 05, 2008 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 6
I think it's great. I always love emo jim. keep it coming ;-)
Date: February 05, 2008 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 6
keep going! it was good to see this pick up again, I'd like to see how you close it...
9 [Report This]Date: February 05, 2008 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 6
I just caught up on your story and I'm so glad to hear that you will be continuing it! I am REALLY enjoying it! I hope you post soon!
Date: February 05, 2008 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 6
Great story please continue it!
B
10 [Report This]Date: February 05, 2008 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 6
I think it's friggen awesome, that's what I think!!
Date: February 05, 2008 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 6
Don't stop now-- I want to see how it ends... Although I don't like the Pam/Ryan thing it looks like they are only friends so I'm hoping Pam will straighten out Jim's jealousy. I'm really liking this story.
Author's Response: Don't worry, the Pam/Ryan thing is more in Jim's head. Thanks for your review!
Date: July 29, 2007 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 5
ARGH! Jim! You putz! That lip gloss is not for Ryan!!!
P.S. Drunk!Pam is v. cute.
Date: July 14, 2007 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Please let her have heard him!!! Dont cut to the next morning- continue their conversation!! This is great stuff!
Date: July 14, 2007 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 4
Really great story do far. I look forward to reading what happens next.
Date: July 14, 2007 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 4
once again..loved it!
continuecontinuecontinue :)
Date: July 14, 2007 01:12 pm Title: Chapter 4
Great job! please continue!
Date: July 14, 2007 10:17 am Title: Chapter 1
Margarita madness, yay! I really enjoy reading this story and it keeps getting better and better!
Date: July 13, 2007 08:59 am Title: Chapter 2
Please continue- I LOVE this story!!! I love the angst build up to this story! Do they get together? Does he throw Karen to the curb? Please keep writing!
Author's Response: Believe me, it gets better! Another chapter should be up by tomorrow.. Thanks for reading!
Date: July 13, 2007 08:02 am Title: Chapter 2
I'm so glad you updated this! I don't know why, but I have some perverse need to see Jim&Pam come together over and over again, with some angst, as though now that I know they can, I need to see this re-created with slightly different scenarios over and over. You're doing a great job, please continue!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! The Jim and Pam storyline never gets old to me! A new chapter should be up by tomorrow!
Date: July 12, 2007 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 2
LOVE IT!
please continue :)
P.S. you write their sexual tension perfectly
Author's Response: A new chapter should be up soon.. more sexual tension to come! haha!
Date: July 01, 2007 10:38 am Title: Chapter 1
definitely interested in reading more!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, just posted another chapter!
Date: June 28, 2007 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
well, yeah you should continue...don't let that which is already written go to waste!
Author's Response: haha, just posted a new one, thanks for reading!
6 [Report This]Date: June 28, 2007 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
decent but badly needs a beta or editing, lots of people will help if you want, needs about 3 times as many paragraphs.
Author's Response: I tried to fix the next chapter so it reads easier. thanks for the advice.
Date: June 28, 2007 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
I can't wait to see what comes next!
10 [Report This]Date: June 28, 2007 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is great! I love drunk Pam and Jim.
Oh and I was going to say the same thing about the paragraphs too. Just break em up a bit and it makes it easier on the eyes. It was a smooth read though even with the longer paragraphs.
Very good! Update soon!
Author's Response:
I already have more, just going through it now to break it up like you all suggested. Definitely makes it easier to read! A new one should be up soon! Thanks for reading!