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Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 16, 2010 11:44 pm Title: First Night Out

I loved that last line "Come on, let's go lie to Michael and go home." Priceless! Also, that bit by the bathrooms was fantastic and with Karen pregnant AGAIN, then Jim and Pam thinking she was hiding it from Kevin. Lovely. Oh. My. God. Is that Kevin... KEVIN MALONE? I always imagined him as someone else, but now that I think about it... oh my goodness!

Lastly, I just want to say, I love all of Jim's longing for Pam, very sexy - and Michael's first outburst of Pam's ass was hilarious. Oh my, this was a great chapter!

Reviewer: feared_or_loved Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2007 06:35 am Title: First Night Out

Awww, little Amelia.  So cute.  And what a convienent excuse to leave a boring party.  Question.  Do you have an end point for this story?  Not that I want it to end or will ever stop reading it.  I thought the baby would be the end but there is obviously a lot of ground that can be covered after that.  Are we going to see the Golden Beet again?

Author's Response:

Yes, I do have an end point for the story. :) I basically have the entire thing planned out, but there are other little storylines that come into play on the route there. I'm not sure what chapter it is...it's a few back (I think around the time that Pam finally gets pregnant?) but I made a comment that I was planning on writing that chapter 5 chapters before or something, and that's basically the way that it's going. I'll be writing something and suddenly think, "Oh! I can add this little thing in there!" and that "little thing" becomes an entirely new chapter and so on and so forth.

I only just realized the other day that I was actually beyond chapter 20. I was like, "Whoa! When did I get here?!?", haha. 

I'm not sure if the Golden Beet is going to make another appearance...if it's really wanted, I might put it in. :) I do know for sure that Dwight and Angela are going to be in the story again within the next couple of chapters. But...that's not always the same. :)

Reviewer: receptionist Signed [Report This]
Date: August 06, 2007 10:24 pm Title: First Night Out

Jan!  Kevin!  David!  unbelievable... stupid karen...


Author's Response: :D I love adding all of the secondary characters in. So much fun!

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