Date: July 02, 2007 09:27 am Title: Chapter 2
"I scramble over to the closet, and spend too long searching for something I know I don’t own"- this is so true!
This chapter perfectly captures her nervousness, and I felt nervous for her sake, too! I LOVED the ending, and I cannot wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: July 02, 2007 08:29 am Title: Chapter 2
I really like this! It's interesting to have the story written as a first person POV. It works well.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: July 02, 2007 07:03 am Title: Chapter 2
I loved this. It gave me chills! I can't wait to see what the card says. Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks! Wednesday sounds good to me!
Date: July 02, 2007 06:37 am Title: Chapter 2
Nicely written! You've conveyed Pam's inner thoughts and insecurities really well. (Hence your title) I love the reference to the dojo. Looking forward to the next post.
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: July 02, 2007 06:20 am Title: Chapter 2
Okay, you MUST continue. Seriously. You had me completely captivated the entire chapter. Pam's nervousness on her first date is exactly what it's like on a first date- you completely captured the insanity of it. I'm really enjoying your writing format- it's truly unique and fantastic. Please continue!!!
Author's Response: Oh, I will! Thank you so much for all your encouragement and responses!! :) HUG.
Date: July 02, 2007 05:51 am Title: Chapter 2
How did you make me love Pam more than I already do? GAH! Who hasn't had those moments, running around freaking out over what to wear and then the guy is EARLY and you can hardly squeak out a coherent thought?
I love everything this story chooses to be.
Author's Response:
Because I'm awesome? Hehe, thank you so much! I love everything your review chooses to be.
10 [Report This]Date: July 01, 2007 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 2
Yay!! I've come to the conclusion that this needs to be at least 9 chapters. Looking forward to it! I'm a huge fan of Pam POV fic, and this is some good shiznit. :D
Author's Response: lol. How much have you had to drink, deary? For now, let's settle on 4 chapters...Probably 5. :)
8 [Report This]Date: July 01, 2007 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 2
OK, so I'll sing your praises here, as well...I love this, and you know I do.
Author's Response: You are too good to me. Thank you SO much for beta-reading! HUG.