Date: July 12, 2007 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 6
I love this little rap up chapter. It's just completely lovely.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I;m going to keep posting here just to keep getting nice reviews ;]
10 [Report This]Date: July 12, 2007 08:30 am Title: Chapter 6
What a great ending to a lovely story. This whole thing has just been very insightful. I think you really had a good handle on Pam's inner thoughts. Well done.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
10 [Report This]Date: July 12, 2007 01:53 am Title: Chapter 6
So, at this point I don't think I even have to tell you, but WAY TO ROCK MY SOCKS!!! I hate that it's over but I love the way you ended it. And the flshback thing was great. So win/win.../win.
Author's Response: Hee! Thanks! I'm glad everyone liked it! It's so cool to have over 6,000 reads...best feeling EVARRR. Seriously, if you decide you want to post yours, send it to me and I'll beta! =D
Date: July 11, 2007 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 6
Very cute. This is your first story, right? Nice first effort! I'm looking forward to reading more from you. The pink and red analogy was really sweet.
Author's Response: Yes, it's my first try. Thank you so much! I'm working on one right now, should be up later tonight. =D
Date: July 11, 2007 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 6
great! very cute! one comment, though--pedals are on a bike. peTals are on a flower. ;-)
Author's Response: Oi! How'd I not catch that? Thanks!! =D
Date: July 11, 2007 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 6
"Pam, I love you. If you say yes, tonight, I’ll set a date, tonight." Best fanfic line, ever! Literally went "ooooh!" out loud. Great ending, great first story!
Author's Response: Thank you! =D Yay!