Reviews For A Matter of Timing
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Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: January 30, 2008 07:59 pm Title: Booze Cruise

Wow. Timing really makes such a big difference, doesn't it?

Reviewer: justy Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 14, 2006 02:53 am Title: Booze Cruise

Jim grabbed her wrist and pulled her in close to whisper, “You owe me, Beesly.”

 

Oooh.

 

Don't you just hate it when you get stuck when writing? 

 



Author's Response:

I would totally melt.

I'm not going to say for sure, but I think I may have broken the writer's block for this story...

Reviewer: bossofdancing Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 11, 2006 09:33 pm Title: Booze Cruise

Aw...I liked this a lot. :)  If only this is how it would have happened....*sigh* Great story!

Author's Response: Aww, yeah, I know.  That's really why I wrote it: self-indulgence.

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 11, 2006 05:47 pm Title: Booze Cruise

That was just such a lovely alternate scenario for Booze Cruise.  Loved it.  I do hope you continue the story in this universe.

Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm considering a continuation.

Reviewer: ElizabethLynn Signed [Report This]
Date: August 11, 2006 03:39 pm Title: Booze Cruise

Good start, both with this fanfic, and with fanfic-ing in general!

Author's Response: Thanks.  I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: bonorocks Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: August 11, 2006 02:52 pm Title: Booze Cruise

Great alternate ending!  You kept true to the pace of the actual episode (like Michael being put on the brig, hehe!)  I think it works as a one-shot, but its your call.  I would like to see Jim get that kiss Pam owes him thought... 

Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad that you liked the brig scene--it made me smile.

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: August 11, 2006 02:25 pm Title: Booze Cruise

Nice alternate ending!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: samsmom Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: August 11, 2006 01:41 pm Title: Booze Cruise

Great alternative ending to Booze Cruise.  I would love to see where you would go with this.



Author's Response: Thanks--I have a little more, but I've blanked now, so I guess I'll just let it stew a little.  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Meghan Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: August 11, 2006 01:15 pm Title: Booze Cruise

hehehe! i'm very giddy after reading this.

great job for your first fanfic! and this should not, i repeat NOT, be a one-shot. please continue!  



Author's Response:

Yay!  I'm glad you liked it! 

I've actually done HP and VMars fic before, just not Office.  I have a second chapter, but then I'm stuck, so...we'll see.

Thanks for reviewing!

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