Date: October 08, 2011 01:33 am Title: Love Will Come Through
I loved this story. Especially when he put it on the line with this:
"Jim Halpert: I hope not, because I broke up with her to be with you."
His anguish during the talking head was amazing.
I am sorry, however, that the expensive meal went uneaten. Not even taken with them to eat later? *sigh* :)
Date: May 11, 2009 07:35 am Title: Love Will Come Through
I'm so glad the mods featured this again, because as a somewhat new reader here, I might never have found it. This was a wonderfully done story, and an interesting changeup from the cliched "first date went great" mantra.
Very believeable, and the characterizations were excellent. Brava.
Date: July 08, 2007 12:51 pm Title: Love Will Come Through
This chapter is cute. I love the IMing. Patent leather thigh boots! Ha! Pam's confusion in the beginning is fun...so Pam!
Date: July 06, 2007 06:05 pm Title: Love Will Come Through
Excellent. I love when they IM. There should be a whole episode that is only IMing and no spoken dialogue. It'd be totally revolutionary!
Okay, perhaps NBC is not ready for that, but, luckily, you're around to write it for me anyway. :)
Date: July 06, 2007 02:28 pm Title: Love Will Come Through
It's been a long time since I've read any fic since so much of it is just half assed retreads of other fics, but this was absolutely amazing and perfect and well worth following the rec link to find.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Date: July 05, 2007 10:20 pm Title: Love Will Come Through
I love a good IM chat between these two... and this one is perfection. Too cute. Nice work.
Author's Response: Thanks very much!
Date: July 05, 2007 10:10 pm Title: Love Will Come Through
Oh, and I'd like to just mention that I didn't read the other reviews before I made mine...we all thought the characters were "spot on." hehehe
Date: July 05, 2007 09:12 pm Title: Love Will Come Through
Wow. This is so amazing. I absolutely loved it. Everything! It was great how you named the director of the documentary Ken and the camera man Randall, just like on the real show. So great!
Author's Response: Hee, I'm glad you noticed our homage to the crew in the names. And thanks for the wonderful feedback.
Date: July 05, 2007 08:45 pm Title: Love Will Come Through
Hee. The IM conversation was very funny, but my favourite line had to be: "Now she pretty much just gets IMs from Michael, who seems to view it primarily as a medium for telling knock knock jokes." That's just so perfectly Michael. Well done! :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Date: July 05, 2007 07:43 pm Title: Love Will Come Through
I just read the whole thing and I really loved this. It was different and believable and just perfect. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! It was my first foray into The Office fic so I'm glad I didn't screw it up.
Date: July 05, 2007 07:30 pm Title: Love Will Come Through
I read this at LJ and thought it was terrific (even rec'd it at TWoP earlier this evening,) so glad you posted it here too. Perfect character voices - not only Pam and Jim, but the ensemble too. And definitely one of the more believable first date fics I've read. Felt very fresh too - funny and poignant and very real. Really a great read.
Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked it! And thanks for the rec at TWOP--it really made our night!
Date: July 05, 2007 07:18 pm Title: Love Will Come Through
I read this on LJ originally (twenty minutes ago actually) so it's nice that it's posted here so I can favorite it, heh.
But what a stunningly beautiful story. A thrill to read from beginning to end, and I love that you chose to pave a different road for the typical first date fics. Awesome job, throughly recommended to anyone that reads in this fandom.
Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much!
Date: July 05, 2007 07:09 pm Title: Love Will Come Through
okay I am enjoying the hell out of this so far! IT's really really good. Love the characterizations and dialoug...it's great. Also - you already posted the whole thing which makes me so happy! More to read!!