Reviews For Past Perfect
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Reviewer: Yesshh Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 08, 2007 01:12 pm Title: (Nothing But) Flowers

Love it! Those "perfect dates" never go the way they're supposed to! I like your use of present-tense. I've seen it in some other stories and haven't liked it, but you've managed to make it work.

Reviewer: Rowena666 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2007 12:15 am Title: (Nothing But) Flowers

I *love* this. I love the look inside pre-date!Jim's head. He's excellently in-character- picking what music to play, what clothing to wear, basically being a girl, a la s2 Jim. Really great story...can't wait to see where it goes!

Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06, 2007 06:14 pm Title: (Nothing But) Flowers

Whee!  Anything that leads to Jim and Pam kissing IS the perfect date.  :)

Reviewer: deerinthepark Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 05, 2007 08:25 pm Title: (Nothing But) Flowers

This was a Pizza Hut! Now it's all covered with daisies!

I like this story so far.



Author's Response: I LOVE that song and I've been wanting to name a fic after it for a long time, so I was excited that it seemed to fit so well for this chapter. Glad you're enjoying it.

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