10 [Report This]Date: August 27, 2007 06:51 am Title: Smile
"his friend, his lover, his dream" I love that description. But that whole paragraph is just.... gah. So sad.
And him talking to the grave... so sad. Damn you, its not even 10 in the morning and I have tears in my eyes.
I love how you are making it so in character for both of them, but still making it likely for Jim/Angela.
Yep, Jim is slowly returning to his old self - banning the word inapproriate.
Jim carrying to her car - so sweet and silly (but I can't help but imagine him also doing it to Pam).
Yowza. I mean, I knew to expect it, but still reading 'falling in love with you' was just... wow.
Date: July 20, 2007 09:49 am Title: Smile
Again I say: Wow. I'm just hooked...totally sucked in, so much that I feel like I'm in a funk. You've pulled off something pretty amazing here, in that you've really presented a relationship with Jim & Angela as progressing in such an organic way that I could absolutely understand why he'd fall in love with her and how they actually might work together.
And the piggy back ride? So adorable.
Author's Response:
Thank you again for another thorough review. You rock!
I had this idea of doing a Jim/Angela story and it just wouldn't leave me. I wanted to make sure I made this relationship believable and still retain the essence of both characters. It means so much to me to hear you say that I accomplished that.
8 [Report This]Date: July 15, 2007 06:28 am Title: Smile
This is unusual, not inappropriate, but unusual. I like it, especially Angela's pranks. Are you going to continue this? I'm just not really sure which direction I see this going so I'm guaranteed to be surprised.
Author's Response: Yep, I'll be continuing this through 5 chapters. I already have the ending written. Thanks for the comment!
Date: July 12, 2007 11:01 pm Title: Smile
I never thought I could like Jim with Angela...or anyone with Angela. But I think you have done such an awesome job with making her a very lovable person. I applaud you and anxiously await more.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! It was a difficult pairing to write, but I wanted it to be believable. I'm glad you like it. Thanks for the comment!
10 [Report This]Date: July 12, 2007 04:30 pm Title: Smile
OK, you know I love it. What else can I say, except when you've got it ready (and you still trust me) send on chapter 3!!
Author's Response: I'm working on chapter 3 right now and will send it as soon as I finish. Thanks once again for your awesome work and I'm glad you like the story.
Date: July 12, 2007 01:22 pm Title: Smile
It's really interesting thinking of these two together. I think you're doing an excellent job. Keep it up. TWSS.
Author's Response: Thanks for the comment! I really appreciate it!
Date: July 12, 2007 12:36 pm Title: Smile
This is so beautifully done, larrymcg! I love how you lay out Jim's transformation into an Angela-lover, and how she changes as well.
Did Dwight love Michael more than Angela? Or maybe it was Starbuck that he loved more than Angela. I hope you'll tell us. In any case, Angela's not engaged, so maybe there's no "I can't" in the future.
One teeny thing - Jim's a trouper, not a trooper. For realsies.
You're doing a great job on this. Your dialogue is believable, and the exposition is so beautifully written. Kudos.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the correction. I changed it before any hussies had the chance to picture him in a police uniform.
Now you've given me the idea for a Dwangela smut fic where Angela dresses up as Starbuck for him, if it hasn't already been done.
For real, I'm so glad you like this story. It really gives me confidence for finishing the rest of the chapters. Thank you so much for your kind comments!