10 [Report This]Date: August 27, 2007 06:57 am Title: First
Aww, Poor Jim, he is trying to hard, and it is failing miserably.
Jim really does have a way of just saying he loves people at totally odd times. I mean, yeah. Usually people date before that happens, but not with Jim.
Wow... jewelers...
Date: July 21, 2007 10:54 am Title: First
Whoa... how did I miss this story? Okay, so it's not like I didn't know of it's existence, but I'll admit to initially being wary of the Jim/Angela storyline.
But it's a testament to your skill as a writer that you were able to not only craft such a believable story, but you actually won me over! I'm sitting here thinking "Jim and Angela... yeah...I could see that now." Amazing.
So shame on me for not giving this story a fair shake when you first posted it three chapters ago. Rest assured I'll be here for the rest.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for giving this story a chance! I know it's a very odd pairing that will turn some people off, but I'm really glad the people who have given it a chance have really enjoyed it.
Hope you like the next two as much as you liked the first three.
Date: July 20, 2007 11:20 am Title: First
Interesting. I really like that Larissa knew to thank Angela, and accept her, instead of worrying about how she wasn't Jim's original 'type'.
I really enjoyed the bowling date and Angela sitting in on poker hands. Angela's only truly happy when she gets to complain a bit, isn't she? The spray stuff made me laugh.
I'm still reading, can't lose me.
Author's Response:
Glad I can't lose you!
Thanks for the comments! Yeah, I figured Angela is so used to complaining that she's actually uncomfortable (actually scares her a little) when she has everything she wants. I figured Larissa would be so happy to see Jim happy that she would be kind to anyone who made him feel that way.
Thanks again!
Date: July 20, 2007 09:56 am Title: First
This is just heartbreaking and poignant, really. So well written. Can't wait for the next chapter --
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing all of these! I'm working on the 4th chapter right now.