10 [Report This]Date: August 31, 2007 06:14 am Title: Chapter 1
I LOOOOVE "Hey There Delilah", and I always thought it would be a song Jim would like.
This is a good story. Short and sweet, and to the point.
Date: August 31, 2007 04:00 am Title: Chapter 1
I love that JIm has Plain White T's and Neil Sedaka on his ipod! I also loved the image of Jim making grilled cheese.
Great first story!
7 [Report This]Date: July 14, 2007 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
Congrats on your first story! This was cute - any story that includes Jim, Pam and grilled cheese sandwiches is a winner in my book. One thing, you might want to change "grill" to "grilled" here: "Jim replied as he flipped over the grill cheese sandwich he was making."
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm off to fix it now! :)
Date: July 09, 2007 06:42 am Title: Chapter 1
That was very cute! I can understand Pam's feelings about camping. Would love some more.
Date: July 08, 2007 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
LOVING Jim's music choices! hehe. This was totally cute!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I always read (and love) your stories so that's awesome coming from you!
8 [Report This]Date: July 08, 2007 04:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
Excellent first chapter princess. I chuckled at the Neil Sedaka selection. Sweet choice.
Author's Response: Thanks, that song just happened to come on my itunes while I was writing!
Date: July 08, 2007 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
very, very sweet. I liked it a lottt
I can really picture Roy saying that about the camping loll. Keep writing! you're great at it.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! :)