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Reviewer: strfsh Signed [Report This]
Date: July 12, 2007 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 2

I absolutely love it.  I liked how you made Pam all awkward around Mark.  I think that is true to her character and it added something to the story.  Please keep writing!

Author's Response: I'll try to, thanks!

Reviewer: the_squirrel Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2007 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 2

i am loving this story!!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad!

Reviewer: BlueSage Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2007 03:49 am Title: Chapter 2

I'm really enjoying this story and can't wait to see where you take this. I'm a big fan of AU stories, especially ones where Pam leaves Roy earlier/PAm and Jim get together earlier/there are less plot devices keeping them apart, etc. 

I think you're doing a good job of showing how confused/desperately-trying-not-to-think Pam would be in this situation. Update soon, please! 



Author's Response: Yes, I like them too!  I forgot to respond to reviews the first time around, so this is late, but thanks!  And I have updated ;)

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