Date: July 14, 2007 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 6
Please dont say its over! Keep going! Theres so much more to this story! Patient: Jim, nurse: Pam....need I say more?
9 [Report This]Date: July 14, 2007 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 6
Still in love with this story.
Date: July 14, 2007 05:19 am Title: Chapter 6
this is sooo good. are you sure you don't want to do another chapter... like a year later, how they coped... where they are... what ghosts are still haunting them? think about it..
luchy
Author's Response: I really like that idea..it looks like there will be one more chapter after all!
Date: July 13, 2007 08:48 am Title: Chapter 5
OH my god what happens next!!!!!????
Date: July 13, 2007 07:05 am Title: Chapter 5
Ok, you have me on the edge of my seat. :) I'm looking forward to reading more.
Date: July 13, 2007 06:17 am Title: Chapter 1
I have been enjoying this story but please don't let Jim die!
Author's Response:
Wish granted!
10 [Report This]Date: July 12, 2007 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 5
oh thank god he is not dead! It was really sweet how she insisted on riding in the ambulance with him. I also really like that you seem to be including a new character in with the police officer. I am loving the sweet police officer!
9 [Report This]Date: July 12, 2007 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 4
ok, i didnt review this before but it was a really good chapter. It was heartbreaking but I thought it was well done. I loved that Pam actually felt guilty about Roy and the last line was so sweet!
10 [Report This]Date: July 12, 2007 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh thank god! I've never been so happy to read a "beep" in my entire life.
10 [Report This]Date: July 12, 2007 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 4
I'm reviewing this chapter because you said you were sad that no one reviewed it.
Anyways, I am quite interested in what happens next.
Author's Response: Ha! Thank you. By the way your name is hilarious! I love it.
Date: July 11, 2007 07:12 am Title: Chapter 3
please keep writing!
10 [Report This]Date: July 10, 2007 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 3
Ok seriously, you CAN NOT kill Jim.
People are writing to many angsty stories where Jim or Pam dies and since I kind of have a addiction to angst, I've been pretty depressed lately.
Make it as angsty as you want JUST DON'T TAKE JIM...or Pam.
10 [Report This]Date: July 10, 2007 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 3
=o I'm in love with this story.
10 [Report This]Date: July 10, 2007 11:16 am Title: Chapter 2
I like it...
how funny would it be if Bob Vance came to the rescue??
Author's Response: Haha what a great idea! I'll have to keep that in mind. I don't really have a clear idea of an ending, so my options are open.
Date: July 10, 2007 09:15 am Title: Chapter 2
oh my god.. you better be updating this quick! screw a beta reader... just write write write!
Author's Response: I'm sure I'll have another chapter up sometime tonight... I'm so happy someone is really enjoying this. I hate it when I get really into a story and then a week goes by and no update.
Date: July 09, 2007 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
hmmmm im intrigued, and i'd be happy to beta for you
Date: July 09, 2007 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh man....totally want to see how this goes!!!
if you're still in need of a beta, i'm here for ya.
Date: July 09, 2007 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. Very interesting. I'm excited to see where you take this. I hope you continue, nicely done!