9 [Report This]Date: November 07, 2009 10:24 am Title: wake up where you are
So cute! I love the title because it pretty much conveys what I think Jim and Pam must have felt after "The Job". Your description of how they've waited long enough already was spot on, in my opinion, and the sweet and tender moments between them after they woke up was especially aww-worthy! Also, I love that the story is from Pam's POV and how incredibly she was to look at a sleeping Jim :o)
Good job!
10 [Report This]Date: July 11, 2007 12:34 pm Title: wake up where you are
Fluffy Jim Pam is exactly what I need. So yay!
I find a good comfort in the fact that the other side of Pam's bed hasn't been occupided since she purchased it, because that means Roy wasn't there. Which means (in my innocent mind) they never had any sex... or even if they did, she still didn't allow him into that part of her life. And sorry, my mind just explores all the ramifications of that one little line.
" Then he squeezed her hand in his sleep, and she was pretty sure it was all real." Oh I love so much about what that line chooses to be.
Oh, I take that back, I love so much about the way the entire story chooses to be. Because if I don't say that then I will just quote every line, and that just isn't awesome.
I know I said not quote every line, but this line - oh yeah, all sorts of awesomeness.
"She buried her face halfway in the pillow as the laughter that bubbled up inside her from the happiness of last night threatened to spill out and disturb Jim."
Oh, yeah, sexy Jim husy voice... oh yeah.
Okay, ignore what I said about not quoting every line:
"with all the emotion in his eyes, she always felt like she was going to drown in it. "
simply... amazing
I give this story one thousand schrute bucks and stanely nickels and all the awesomeness in the world.
Author's Response:
First of all, I have to say that this just might be the best review I have ever received in my entire fanfic writing "career". :D You know how to make an author feel special, that's for sure. ;)
I'm really glad you enjoyed it so much, and got the sense of happiness from it I had while writing, and wanted readers to get. Then again, it's hard to imagine waking up to Jim without a sense of total happiness. I just can't do it. hehe Thank you so much for your feedback, it's lovely. :)
Date: July 11, 2007 10:37 am Title: wake up where you are
ah, sweet fluff. thanks for that.
Date: July 11, 2007 10:23 am Title: wake up where you are
Aww, good stuff! I especially liked this line:
His fingers were massaging her scalp while his other hand rested atop hers on his chest, and she thought she might die from happiness. She also briefly wondered when she became such a cheeseball.
Very cute, very in-character!
Date: July 11, 2007 09:54 am Title: wake up where you are
That was a great story. Short, sweet and to the point...pure happiness and fluff. What a great way to wake up in the morning.
Date: July 11, 2007 08:07 am Title: wake up where you are
Hooray! I love the morning-after-sex sex. ;)
10 [Report This]Date: July 11, 2007 04:22 am Title: wake up where you are
**sigh** I love this. And I would LOVE to wake up to Jim Halpert.
You never disappoint!
Author's Response:
Who wouldn't want to wake up to Jim Halpert? ;)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)