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Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03, 2007 05:38 am Title: Ambition Envy

Oooh, I know nothing about design and everything about HTML. Okay, and not everything. But some things. I could pair up with pam. That would be fun!

Author's Response: Hehe. I know nothing about any of it. I hope it's even quasi realistic that her desire to graphic design would remotely correlate to web design. Design's in the name, right?

Reviewer: albie_ Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28, 2007 04:22 pm Title: Ambition Envy

Another intriguing look at Jim and I really liked the honesty in the conversation between Jim and Pam. I especially enjoyed that final line about not envying Ryan's position, but his ambition. I didn't think Jim turning down the promotion only had to do w/ Pam and I like how Jim in your story is having to face that head on. And yay for Ryan giving Pam this kind of opportunity. 

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the kind words. I do really believe that Jim has to be pretty ambivalent about things at some point, especially after finally getting what he wanted for so long. He might not want the job at Corporate, but that doesn't mean that he doesn't want something more at some point out of his career. Having Pam kind of leaves him without a goal, and that has to put a lot of pressure on Pam and the relationship. I'm glad that you're enjoying my attempt at conveying these ideas.

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