Date: August 03, 2007 08:56 pm Title: Ryan's Proposal
Ah, that was a really nice full-circle ending. Really enjoyable story! Nice work. And good luck to Jim and Ryan. I'd love to read that story!
Author's Response: Thank you for the great review! I just might revisit Jim and Ryan's little world somewhere down the line. We shall see. Glad you liked it.
Date: August 03, 2007 06:49 am Title: Ryan's Proposal
Very nice! I wonder if Ryan will have Dunder Mifflin as a client for his temp agency? :-P Great first effort!
Author's Response: Can you imagine how hurt Michael would be if they didn't get a temp from Ryan's agency?
Date: August 03, 2007 05:42 am Title: Ryan's Proposal
I am in a rush, but I just wanted to say I really enjoyed this story, and really great job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for all the great reviews!
9 [Report This]Date: August 03, 2007 12:36 am Title: Ryan's Proposal
What a great piece! You did a wonderful job with Ryan and Jim and I really liked how you kept switching up the point of view.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I liked getting into both their heads-it's funny, I found Ryan easier in the beginning, and then Jim easier near the end. But it was fun. I'm really happy you enjoyed reading it.
10 [Report This]Date: August 02, 2007 10:57 pm Title: Ryan's Proposal
Wonderful end to a great story. Again, I really enjoyed the dynamic between jim and ryan that you illustrated here and how Ryan is one of the few characters that Jim cannot completely charm. And Ryan is such an open book to Jim.
I also really liked your take on Jim's ambition for work and it really makes complete sense(him not having as much drive for work since he now has Pam) and I would love to see the show go in this direction too. Not that I want Jim going anywhere, but him confronting that would be great.
Ryan's idea for atemp agency made me laugh and it also made want a sequel. Great story! Hope to read more from you in the future.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for all your really encouraging reviews. I look forward to seeing them after I write a chapter.
It took me about two days to decide on what sort of business Ryan would want to open, then it just dawned on me how fitting a temp agency would be. I'm really glad you liked the idea too!
Date: August 02, 2007 09:13 pm Title: Ryan's Proposal
This was just fantastic! I loved reading about Jim and Ryan's quasi-relationship. I would love to hear more, maybe an epilogue from a couple years down the road? I'm just being greedy. :) Nice Job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. We shall see if the muse brings me back to this little world or not. I'm really glad you enjoyed reading it.
9 [Report This]Date: August 02, 2007 09:09 pm Title: Ryan's Proposal
WOW! This is just so great. First off, it takes courage to write a story that is about more than the Jim/Pam romance. And exploring the Jim/Ryan relationship is really interesting -- and I really hope we get to see some of the character development you've written in S4. Nicely done.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm not sure if it was courage on my part to go this route, or just wanting to go in my own direction and not compete with all the great Jim/Pam writers out there. I really appreciate the kind words.