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Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 09, 2007 03:31 pm Title: Jim, Pam and the Three Bosses

Oh my -- that is one hell of a proposal -- on all fronts. 


Author's Response: Thanks! I really worried that whole scene was a bit to fluffy and over the top, but I really liked the thought of Pam stepping in there and being the one to propose. Life just can't always go as planned. :)

Reviewer: Donnelly Signed [Report This]
Date: September 09, 2007 09:16 am Title: Jim, Pam and the Three Bosses

great chapter

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm pretty fond of this one myself for some reason, though I fear it might have been a bit out of the general tone of the story. So I really appreciate hearing you liked it!

Reviewer: Alyssa Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08, 2007 01:10 pm Title: Jim, Pam and the Three Bosses

as I was reading the end of your story I had an epiphany. Becca Lavender doesn't know how much I like her story! And so here it is: it is awesome (very kevin-esque comment I know) and I can't wait for the next chapters

 



Author's Response: Aw, thanks. I'm really happy to hear you like it!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: September 08, 2007 04:46 am Title: Jim, Pam and the Three Bosses

Nice twist.  You really have done a good job.  I can't believe it's your first effort!  I hope you continue.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I have about one more chapter plus an epilogue of this to write, then I imagine I will keep writing as the ideas come as I'm really enjoying the writing.

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07, 2007 10:19 pm Title: Jim, Pam and the Three Bosses

Aw, that was really nice. I feel like there could be more, but I like where it ended too.

Author's Response: Thanks! I actually think there will be one more chapter, so we can see Jim's take one more time plus an epilogue.

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