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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 12, 2022 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 1

"And just like always he knows just enough about her to make things difficult but not enough to actually be helpful." Damn.

You really captured Pam's Casino Night mindset so well here.

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: July 14, 2007 11:15 am Title: Chapter 1

Very interesting and cool use of metaphor! Cutting back and forth between the true scene and her balancing act performance was inspired. Well done!

Author's Response: Inspired, wow. Thank you!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13, 2007 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 1

This metaphor is beautifully done.  Ow.  And Wow. 

Author's Response: Thank you!

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