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Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2008 08:56 am Title: Split-Second Decisions

Ooooh this is so good!

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: July 16, 2007 02:50 pm Title: Split-Second Decisions

Pretty cool so far! You've somehow managed to make it both kind of freaky/tense and fun/cute - great combination!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: July 16, 2007 02:08 pm Title: Split-Second Decisions

John McClane's not dead yet, anyway.  I like "Air ducts: a world of adventure."

I'd recently thought about Die Hard in The Office (on the day I saw #4), but I didn't really want to write it, so I'm glad that you are. 

I love how movie and TV shows always have people climbing through the air ducts.  And the air ducts are always plenty big.  ("I know, let's drive our SUV through the air ducts!"  Okay, not quite, but still!

Anyway, fun! 



Author's Response: Thank you!!

Reviewer: mizjessica08 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 16, 2007 11:32 am Title: Split-Second Decisions

Nifty! You HAVE to keep this going!

Author's Response: Thank you! I definitely will!

Reviewer: rulesofjinx Signed [Report This]
Date: July 16, 2007 10:10 am Title: Split-Second Decisions

hehe this could be fun :)


Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: July 16, 2007 09:59 am Title: Split-Second Decisions

The supply closet is a good start!  And what the heck could anyone want at Dunder-Mifflin?  Hope you are updating soon!


Author's Response: Heee, your questions will be answered in time... Thanks!!

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed [Report This]
Date: July 16, 2007 08:55 am Title: Split-Second Decisions

What a fun premise and great start.  Always fun to see Jim and Pam out of their natural element.  Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Glad you like it!

Reviewer: Cousin Mose Signed [Report This]
Date: July 16, 2007 08:51 am Title: Split-Second Decisions

Nicely done, Puff! I love the changes you made. Makes the action flow a lot smoother and really tightens the story up a bit. Now, here's hoping that at some point, SOMEONE says the infamous "Yippie Ki-yay..." line. (Crosses fingers and hopes it's Michael and that he screws it up.) :)

Look forward to the next installment! 



Author's Response: Thanks so much! :oD

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 16, 2007 08:33 am Title: Split-Second Decisions

oh, how fun, Puff!!  Looking forward to more...

Author's Response: Thank you, Moxie!

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