Date: February 10, 2008 08:58 am Title: Into the Darkness
This is so intense! Loving it. =)
Date: October 29, 2007 05:35 pm Title: Into the Darkness
ohhmyygoddd. i got chills so many times throughout this already! i can't WAIT until you add the next part.
it has me so scared and excited, but it also has the perfect amount of JAM (:
i hope you add the next part soon !
Date: July 18, 2007 06:15 pm Title: Into the Darkness
Good team work from those two! Really enjoying this and looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you!!
10 [Report This]Date: July 18, 2007 06:12 pm Title: Into the Darkness
Excellent Idea! Timely too. Jim could so be John McCain.
Author's Response: Thanks!!!
Date: July 18, 2007 05:55 pm Title: Into the Darkness
Naturally the shoes had to come off. It's Die Hard. They should make fists with their toes, though. It's the John McClane thing to do.
Fun!
Author's Response: Hahaha, "make fists with their toes". Awesome. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!
Date: July 18, 2007 11:57 am Title: Into the Darkness
Excellent! The changes you made helped an already strong chapter just that much better! I loved the little moments of JAM awkwardness and humor interspersed with the tension of the moment. I love where this story is headed. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you!!
10 [Report This]Date: July 18, 2007 11:56 am Title: Into the Darkness
Nothing sexier than being covered in air vent dust. ;-) I'll bet Pam will find it hard to resist in the next chapter. (Hey, all summer blockbusters have gratutious sex and nudity - don't forget that!!) :-)
Can't wait to read more, Puff!
Author's Response: Hehe, thanks so much!